Not have it in the SECOND film.
We don't get to know much about Gwen in the first film.
She's a scientist. She's Peter's girlfriend. Ok.
Cross some boundaries before she dies.
Let them have an intimate moment.
Maybe they have sex.
Maybe they just hug real close after a really dramatic moment.
Something really serious like that to really make the film dramatic.
You need to develop stakes to really make a film memorable.
The greater the stakes, the greater the empathy, the great the emotionally driven loss.
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